Darcy -Not Yet Accepted-

[Darcy]

*Name: Darcy

*Age (apparent as well): 15

*Sex: female

Martial Status: single

Height: 5"4

Weight: 90

*Hair: purple/black short in the back and long in the front

*Eyes: black

*Physical Build: thin

*Location of birth: in the mystical wood

*Personality: Explosively angry.

*History: Unknown (Will add soon)

[Raven Angela Shroud]

I see you added some extra things, but you will need a bit more detail and a history in order to be accepted. Try adding more 'meat' to the 'bones', give some pictures, make your character flesh, with more of a personality. Why is she explosively angry? Try not to make your descriptions less then ten words except for when there is only one word (eg: age, marital status, age, hight, weight.) And please choose a real place for your character's location of birth.